Sofia Infante
Science 8B
Brian Gorodetsky
26/1/2013
The Governor
Skylar
walked wearily with the package in his jacket tightly tucked under his arm. He stopped and looked around, saw no one
suspicious and slipped the package in the mailbox. He looked up again. His blue
eyes searching the streets as he walked. Checking his back constantly, he
turned the corner into a small alley connecting two streets. Skylar walked
forward as he reached the end of the two large men popped out.
“The package
now!”
“I don’t
have it.”
Skylar
looked back and two more guards were surrounding him. The guards got closer and
closer. Skylar thought quickly, he ran up the wall and jumped over the guards.
They fired but he was one of the best spies the CIA had, which meant he is
quick. He ran to the end of the alley the guards chasing him. He looked back
just once more to see four large guards chasing him. He turned around and found
himself looking at a woman. A woman in black clothes and a down jacket and a
gun in her hand. Her face scared and her eyes filled with anger but she held a
smirk. Skylar looked down and placed his hand on his stomach he slowly weakened,
he fell to the ground, his arm fell lax. His phone fell out of his hand, it
light up and “message sent,” slid across.
Chapter 2
“Morgan
guess what? Someone found a massive virus on their computer and the virus
turned out to be the biggest virus in the world capable of taking down a whole
a whole country.”
“ That cool.
Way more exciting then my day.” Said Morgan as he chuckled
Dexter felt
the bussing in his leg and pulled out his phone.
“Message!! It’s
a message from…Skylar.”
“The jerk who got you kicked out Stanford.”
“Ya….”
“Well what
does it say?!”
“Don’t let
it fall into the wrong hands. You’ll be in danger but she’ll help you.”
“What does
it mean?”
“I have no
idea.”
Dexter stared
at his phone in confusion. He read it over and over in his head.
“Don’t let
it. It, what’s it?”
“Well I
guess we’ll find out. Dexter we better go.”
“Yea…yea,
I’ll be right there,” said Dexter as his eyes slowly left his phone and he
repeated the text once more in his head.
The two men
both having mixed feeling: confusion, excitement, fright; left the small
circular compound in which Dexter and Morgan lived. They both jumped in their
Nerdherd car and drove to the BuyMore. Dexter was silent during the ride but Morgan
thought out load about the message.
“Maybe he’s
giving you a girl as a sorry for kicking you out of Stanford. I mean it makes
sense doesn’t it? How much you wanna bet that Skylar is rich now and has the
best job ever? Him just sitting in his room smoking a cigar and whiskey and
lots of girls and his impressive good looks. His perfectly high cheek bones…his
full brown hair…I wonder if he uses conditioner. I really have to start my hair
is like a haystack. All ha….”
“Morgan!! You’re
not helping. I’m trying to think and your talking about Skylar’s looks!”
Both fell
silent. Dexter stared forward with his eyebrows pulled down and his eyes in a
slight squint. Morgan sat looking out the window mimicking Dexter’s words.
Dexter sat
at the Nerd herd desk in the middle of the BuyMore with his hands resting on
palm and his elbow resting on the table. Morgan strolling around selling
appliances to costumers. Out of the corner of his eye he spotted Dexter staring
at nothing in a gaze. He excused himself from the costumer and made his way
over to Dexter.
“You
thinking about the text?”
“Huh? Ya.”
“Well you
don’t have to worry well find out what he’s talking about soon enough. Just
give it some time.”
“Ya…ya your
right. I mean something will happen soon enough,” said Dexter as he raised
himself up straight and the confused left his face.”
The rest of
the day flew by.
“Hey ill
meet you at home. I’m just going to take the bus home.”
“Ok Morgan.
Ill see ya there.”
Morgan made
his way to the door.
“Hey buddy!”
“Yea Dex.”
“Thanks.
Thanks for everything. Thanks for keeping me in line. Not just today but
everyday.”
“Yea no
problem what are friends for if you don’t.”
“Yea,”
Dexter said quietly as he smiled.
Morgan
started walking again and left the BuyMore. Dexter stood there in the middle of
the poorly light BuyMore. He sat down and sat at his computer. He went up to
the search bar and out of curiosity typed, “Skylar Parkins.” He found nothing
but a picture of Skylar in college. Its like he had disappeared off the face of
the Earth after college. Dexter looked up from the computer and looked at his
watch.
“10:00. Damn, lock up was 30 minutes ago. Big John is going to’ be pissed.”
“10:00. Damn, lock up was 30 minutes ago. Big John is going to’ be pissed.”
Dexter
packed up all his stuff grabbed the keys and walked outside and locked down the
BuyMore. He walked to his. Out of the corner he saw something under a car. It
was like a lump. Then he saw it; he saw the dim lights of thermal goggles. He
got into his car and act like he never saw anything.
He arrived
home.
“Hey Morgan,
you would believe what I saw when I was leaving the BuyMore!”
Morgan
appeared from around the corner eating a slice of pizza.
“What a
polar bear?” said Morgan sarcastically.
“No I saw a
person spying on me from under a car.”
“It was
probably just Anna and Taylor being their stalker, perverted, Asian selves.”
Dexter
wasn’t satisfied. But he let it be.
Chapter 3.
Dexter woke
up took a stretch and walked downstairs. He passed Morgan’s door and he could
hear him snoring all the way from down the hall. He put the coffee on and
walked outside to get the newspapers. He opened the door and there was the
morning newspaper but next to it was the pile of usual mail and a small
package. He set everything on the kitchen got his coffee and sat down at the
table. Dexter is a very eager person so he always opens biggest to smallest.
Even when he was a kid. He opened the package and only found a bracelet. It was
streak black. And looked very spy like.
“Wow this
looks awesome! Its like iron mans arm piece but a lot smaller.”
He opened the bracelet put out his arm and put
the bracelet on. Dexter started to shake and he could feel a piercing pain in
his arm. The bracelet made a high-pitched noise and then broke, sparks flew and
it fell off Dexter’s arm onto the table. Dexter in shock with his eyes bulging put
his arms up and fell with his chair. He laid there on the ground unconscious.
Chapter 4
“Dexter…hey
Dexter wake up.”
Dexter sat
up in daze and shook his head.
“What
happened,” said Morgan
“I don’t
know exactly all I know is that there is something wrong with that bracelet,”
said Dexter pointing at the black broken bracelet on the table.
“Ok well do
you feel anything different,” said Morgan as he helped Dexter off the floor.
“No not
really. I feel normal.”
“Ok then. We
got to’ go we are late.”
Dexter and
Morgan gathered their stuff and made their way to their jobs at the Buy More.
Dexter made
his way to the Nerd Herd desk but today was different. It took him less time to
get to the desk it took him less time to do everything, he was faster than
usual. In the duration of the day he could feel something was different he
could do things better than he could before. He could run faster, have faster
reflexes, he was stronger and for some reason the small paper cuts he had from
before were healing way faster. By the end of the day Dexter couldn’t wait to
tell Morgan, he didn’t have anytime during the day he was to busy studying his
new abilities.
“Morgan that
bracelet it did something to me,” said Dexter breaking the silence in the car
home.
“Really! I
was hoping it gave you super powers or something,” said Morgan excitedly.
“Yea but I’m
not so sure that its power. I don’t know what it is I just feel different.
Faster in everyway,” Said Dexter sharing Morgan’s excitement.
They arrived
home in a matter of no time. They got into the house and Dexter put all his
stuff down excitedly with a big smile.
“I’m going
to go tell Ellie!”
“Yes, ok. I’ll
come with so I can be the dramatic feeling when you tell her.”
They both
went out the door quickly and went to the next house in their tiny circular
place. They were just in front of the door and about to knock when a hand
grabbed both of them by their shirts and pulled them into the bush next to the
door. A hand went over their mouths and their eyes widened and they moaned.
“Hey be
quiet and ill tell you what’s going,” Said a quiet but soft voice from behind
them.
They nodded
their heads and the hands came off their mouths and a stunning woman appeared
in a crouched position in front of them. Her blond hair silky and blue eyes
liked electricity. She wore casual clothes, dark jeans, a blue shirt and a
black leather jacket.
“Listen,
whichever one of you is Dexter,”
Dexter
raised his hand.
“Ok you. You
recently got a bracelet from Skylar Parkins, a former CIA agent. That bracelet
is no ordinary bracelet. When put on it on it injects the DNA of a super human.
A person capable of impossible reflexes, incredible speed, the jumping height
of a Kangaroo, the intelligence of a genius, the mind capacity greater than a
computer and the strength of a body builder.”
“Dude! Your
friken’ awesome,” yelled Morgan as he put his hand up for a high-five.”
“Shhhh. Keep
your voice down. You are in deep danger. Criminals all over the world would do
anything to be what you are. So if you care about your sister you wont tell
anyone. Do you understand?”
Dexter
nodded his head bewildered.
“So Skylar
is cooler than he was in college. I didn’t even think that was possible.”
“He was. But it doesn’t matter. I am now your handler from
the CIA, my name is Gabriella but you call me Gaby. Ok so lets get to it tomorrow
we start your training.”
“But I have work tomorrow.”
“I think this is more important. Actually no, I will teach
you to use your abilities without exposing yourself.”
That night Dexter didn’t sleep in the slightest. You would
think a person in his position would be excited but he was just scared.
Chapter 5
“Good Morning, Dexter, “Said Gaby as she looked over him with
a smile.
“AHH!”
“Ha-ha, sorry I didn’t mean to scare but wow you scream like
a girl. But hurry up we have to go.”
Dexter rushed around the house muttering to him about not
being a little girl. They were out of the house in 5 minutes, a new record.
That they did many tests working all his abilities.
Dexter looked down at a piece of paper that he was signing.
“Hey Dexter catch!”
Gaby threw a pencil straight at his face and he caught it
like it was a miniature fly.
“Good job. But that was just one test. They are more coming
so stay alert.”
The day flew by and Dexter had used his abilities to learn
everything extremely fast. All sunk into his memory.
“Hey Morgan see you at home ok?”
“Yea Dex no problem.”
The car ride unlike others wasn’t silent.
“So how did you know Skylar?”
“In the CIA we were partners for a long time. Until he sent
you the package, he went out on his own.”
“mhhm. I’m CIA property now right.”
“Yes, you are because you hold one of the CIA’s greatest
invention you are our one and only asset.”
“Ok, so let me get this straight with your signal tons of CIA
agents will arrive on the spot.”
“Yes, but we wont call anyone in because we have to get you
trained to be a spy.”
They arrived home; they walked through the small arch and
into the larger circle with 3-4 houses.
Gaby froze but left the same expression. Dexter stopped as
well slightly confused.
“Dexter there are three men behind you in the veins on the
wall. How many on my side?”
“One, guess they don’t think your bad enough,” Said Dexter
seriously.
“I need you to use everything I taught you to take out these
men. There is one top center, another in the left corner and one on the ground.
What you need to do is quickly run and jump onto that wall throw a man down
onto the ground man and take out the other. I'll deal with this guy. Remember
your not immortal your just fast and smart.”
“Got it.”
Gaby acted like she was giving a high five but really with
her other hand she counted to three. On three Gaby ran to the one man swept his
feet and kneed him in the head knocking him unconscious. While on the other side Dexter did exactly
what he was told h pushed the first guy off ,while jumping and balancing on the
small ledge, knocking the ground floor man out. He then threw the best punch he
could give to the oncoming man in the corner. His super strength flew the man
onto the floor. Everything went so fast.
“Dexter that was great. Your first real fight and you did
excellent.”
She gave him a real high
five this time. At that moment Morgan walked in.
“Jesus Christ!”
Morgan stopped dead in his tracks.
“This is just the start Morgan.”
Your Genetic Story is certainly action packed and cool and it has aspects that definitely came from your social interactions, but there is a slight lack in the explanation of how the bracelet affected Dexter's DNA. It simply says that DNA was injected into him, but the story fails to mention how the Superhuman DNA affected his own DNA. Apart from that, I found it an interesting story with only a few grammatical mistakes. :D
ReplyDeleteSofia, Your story sets the stage for a great mini-series that could be picked up by Fox or MTV. I agree with Alex that us science experts would want more details about the DNA modifying watch. Perhaps you can elaborate on the watch more after we study the unit genetics further. Great effort!
ReplyDeleteYour story is great! You used a wide vocabulary and really made the story adventurous. I agree with Alex about the DNA information, and just a few grammatical errors, but other wise it was a really catching story :)
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